My dad was reading off some haiku so I told him I'd write two about tonight, (but it's really like few word stories)
Mom made homemade hot chocolate, my sisters had just come in from skating on the lake, had pork chop sandwiches whilst sharing haiku and funny things :)
1.
Hot Chocolate on the table
rosy cheeked sisters
Skates at the door
2.
Family round the table
Stories shared
laughing
What do you think? Did I do alright?
Cool! I don't think I'd ever heard of haiku before...it's neat! :)
ReplyDeleteYeah 😊
ReplyDeleteDad just got a book with a bunch of them. I'm trying to get him to write one soon, if he does maybe I'll post it😉
I love writing sweet, simple haikus as well. Lovely job!
ReplyDeleteTane ♥
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ReplyDeleteThanks it was fun, really helps to capture the moment.
Thanks for commenting :) I like to know what my friends think.
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I really love the first one. I think you captured the specificity of the moment -- the openness of rose cheeks is brought to focus with 'skates at the door very cool.
ReplyDeleteAw thanks daddy :)
DeleteNow you have to write one too ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤